For the next one,,, I'd like to write another poem and ...
Can you see whats goin on inside my Poem???
Mrdonsmile was create another one and if you want to know whats goin on inside my poem,,,Just let Mr.E-boy and Mr.Use guide you to find that one.
The title for this one is :
I SAW A STAR
I saw a star
Like dust upon the sky
It looks so far
Keep shining every night
Everytime I try
Use to take your light
But now I know
All of it cant be real
But let me show
Yes I can if I feel
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Thats it what I can say and now,,, let Mr.Eboy and Mr.Use guide you to find something inside.
Mr.E-boy : I give you clue 1414,,,,can you find it??
Mr.E-boy : 1414,,,,whats that??? Still dont know??
Mr.E-boy : it means 1 alphabeth, space, 4 alphabeth, space, 1 alphabeth, space, 4 alphabets.
Mr.E-boy : Like this.... - ---- - ---- and fill the blank.
Mr.E-boy : Fill with what???Is it makes you confuse??
Mr.E-boy : Just fill with the alphabeth before one line.
Mr.E-boy : I'll fill 3 alphabeth and it can be like this >>>> I ---e - -a--.
Mr.E-boy : Now,,,you can continue it....
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Thats from Mr.E-boy,,,and now,,,let Mr.Use give you the meaning of my poem.
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Mr.Use : Just let me tell you that Mrdonsmile, try to tell you that the star is the girl.
So,,,
I saw a star, means,,, I saw a girl.
Like dust upon the sky, means,,, It so many girl Inside this world
It looks so far, means,,, I've just can look but I dont kow her much more
Keep shining every night, means,,, keep coloring this world with her beauty inside
Everytime I try, means,,, I tryin everytime, everytime, and everytime
Use to take your light, means,,, to get her attention
But now I know, means,,, and finaly I know something
All of it cant be real, means,,, thats just another fantasy fo me
But let me show, means,,, but I tell you something
Yes I can if I feel, means,,, I can get it if I can feel it
Mr.Use : Get what???and feel what??? Just mrdonsmile knows, and he will tell you later
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Thats one for star light who shining my heart,,, and now,,, I wanna say .....
"Thanks God, I found you."
Thats all and keep peace, love, and smile.
